by SaraR Aug 10, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You serve no purpose in my life, yet you still find ways to reappear |
by Sara
Aww I liked this poem=) but how can you be so strong? //sara |
by ASPHYXIATED
I liked it aswel my only tips would be to work on the lenght of each line and make it fit with the flow better! |
by Patrik
good poem, I feel the oposit of Noni though, flow didn't come until the middle and to the end |