Pretty good. I can see this as a song. Good luck at your show.

Wow that is going to make an incredible song. Your talent is amazing I could never write a song. I would love to hear it. Take Care! Brooke~

I really like it, i would love to hear the song itself, but its a lovely song and has a really good and positive message.

I'd love to hear your band someday.

Ohhhh record it onto your comp and send me a copy! the lyrics are brilliant!! seriously! and the last line was brilliant, PURE brilliance, its alwayz darkest before daylight, great job!!! 5/5

Powerful song. Loved the line: When your sun abandons your sky
This has a really nice message to it, and is well written. Really is incredible.

Wow I love this! I am sure it's a beautiful song. wish I could hear what it sounds like sung. What kind of band do you have--meaning any plans for an album of some sort? you have talent!

I can't wait to hear this song. Be sure to upload it to the net (try Newgrounds.com) and send me a link!
Looking forward to it
-Daniel

Thank you. I recorded this a while ago. I need to find a copy of it and upload it to my new computer. I might make a music video for it and post it up.