hey, nice work. i think there could be some improvments, like if you went into a little more depth about your feelings, and the path you have left behind, and the path you are walking (and the path infront of you) also a little more on your feelings, i think would have been good, but i really like this none the less.

i hope you dont mind my ideas - if you dont like them then dont listen lol.
thanx a heap
bye bye
Ben

Nice piece, but I wanted more! I think you could still expand on this poem and it will become even more awesome!

Warmest regards,

Steve