It Came From Within

by Shelby G.   Aug 10, 2005


The quiet kid in the back of the class
Sitting silently, letting all time pass
The sweet girl who loved to help
Even whet hit she wouldn't yelp
No one really knows her
She's a jolly lassie, their sure
But theres things about her they don't know
Until the day she let go

It came from within
A Beautiful sin
The loser who wins
In the end of the world
She will be heard
She'll speak her mind
Harsh words so kind
It comes from within

The quiet girl in the back of the class
Has finaly gone, her time has passed
She's the one who now needs help
She let it go, but didn't tell
No one noticed that she'd gone
Without "good bye" or a "so long"
The things about her they didn't know
Couldn't be helped, but now they show

Died by commiting a simple sin
All her hate came from within

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  • 19 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Oh... And I gave it a 5, by the way! lol

  • 19 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Wow... Sad, but meaningful. It really sets a new light on life. Smooth, natural rhythm & flow as well. I think this is one of your better poems.
    -Kate
    P.S. Sorry I've been gone sooo long! Got my computer back!

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written. Defiantly one of my favorite poems on this site. Keep up the amazing work. xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by Issa

    Loved it :D.

    Well to answer that people only comment when they feel bad for something because it was a true story etc =\ otherwise they dont bother.. sadly because there are alot of great poems like this one that diserve ratings / comments.

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