Goood flowing and rhymes,.. keep up the good work and always strive for the best u can do .. pZ 5/5

Ahh this is very well written, i like the last line alot its very good. 5/5

Hmm good work but theres something i dont like about it. eh im not sure...4/5

Well written 5/5

thx for r/c on my poems

love always

natalie