I Love You & I Hate You

by Marie   Aug 10, 2005


I love the way you stroke my hair,
and how you hold me tight.
I hate the way I tear apart,
in every battle that we fight.

I love the way you take my breath,
and how it makes me feel.
I hate the way you made me think,
that your love for me was surreal.

I love the words you said to me:
"When you'll be gone, what will I do?"
I hate the way I don't think you want me,
as much as I want you.

I love holding your hand,
and resting on your arm.
I hate the way you made me suffer,
without doing much harm.

I love they way you say my name
and I love your soft, sweet voice.
But I hate the way you left me here,
without having a choice.

I love the way you look at me,
and I love your tender touch.
But I hate the way I need you,
to be with me so much!

I loved it when you were there,
and how you put a smile on my face,
but I hate the way you broke my heart,
when you said I lost my place.

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  • 19 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    WOW.. this is soo good.. i love the way each stanza has the i hate and i love you part to it.. great skills.. this poem ROCKS!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Christa

    This is an absolutely amazing poem!! I really loved it. keep up your amazing work!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Laura

    OMG! I loved that poem! You can really write! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by My Life Will Never Be The Same

    i think that is very very good..thanks so much for the comment on my poem..i rewrote it and changed something about it. and i am not sure i should repost it or not. i like the new one i wrote better. but i like this poem..i could read the emotion in it. great job. 5/5....please read and comment on more of my poems if you can..oh by the way i read your profile..and you are into the same things as me..lol..i love to sing and dance and all that stuff too. but yeah thanks again for the comment. good job on this poem..

    Crystal

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    girl i almost cried i love this poem sooooooooooooo much

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