sad,,,,,,,, I wanna go cry now :( great write

Awesome poem! The flow is great and the imagery is brilliant! I really like the third stanza. Not only does it reveal more of the mystery, but I found it captivating. Also, it added to the intensity of the piece.

"My remaining strength clutches the note
Explaining my wrongful choice
My regretful sorrows roll down my face"

The only criticism I have in this stanza, is the over usage of the word "my". Other than that it's superb.

I found the last stanza to be very powerful and concluded the poem quite nicely! Keep it up~Holly