Some one

by Some one   Aug 11, 2005


You left me 5 years ago. I didn't know what to do my heart just sank.
Dad said i have a girlfriend she may be my wife. How could he try to replace you like that.

How could you leave me like that mom. you knew i need you .
i guess you'll never know thats i love.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Patrik

    Good poem, but try putting it in to lines, pritty much where you have a . you should break it to a new line and it'll improve it alot:)

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

    PS. Thanks for your comment