I am the girl

by nessa   Aug 11, 2005


As i watch and wait for the sun to rise, for the birds to sing and realise,
that today is the day,
that the world will end,
for a girl who believes that she cant pretend,
she cant pretend to be herself,
she cant pretend that she loves herself,
she wants to change,
but she cant fit in,
so carrying on would make life worse in the end,
i am the girl with no hope in her life,
the girl who is unhappy with the things in her life,
so today is the day that my life will end,
things will change it will be better in the end.

*please tell me what you think i would really appreciate it*

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  • 19 years ago

    by zay

    ilove it

  • 19 years ago

    by Scars on my Wrist

    Since you asked, OKAY! Yeah, you can feel the pain, the emotions. Its pretty good. But if you don't get mad, I'd like to make a suggestion. You should break the poem into lines. I noticed you did it a little in the other poems you wrote, and they are good too, but hey, its just a suggestion!
    Keep it up
    Luv ya,
    Ravine

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