Comments : I am the girl

  • 19 years ago

    by Scars on my Wrist

    Since you asked, OKAY! Yeah, you can feel the pain, the emotions. Its pretty good. But if you don't get mad, I'd like to make a suggestion. You should break the poem into lines. I noticed you did it a little in the other poems you wrote, and they are good too, but hey, its just a suggestion!
    Keep it up
    Luv ya,
    Ravine

  • 19 years ago

    by zay

    ilove it