That was fantabulous!! i loved it (im starting to think im gettin a lil romantic from wat u guys write over here!!) ur flow, rhythm, and choice of words was gr8.. this emotion and feeling is so wonderful, tho its sad.. im sorry if its true..
keep going..
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I've been there, it's agonising. But this poem is really touching.

Lv A, x

It's good!! Really a nice poem! Waiting for the second part!

*completely speechless in amazment*

U r an amazing writer

I love this poem it is so pretty and it is reall beatifual

I am really really enjoying reading your work. I look forward to reading the next poem.

Ahhhh this is so cute. i love it.

Omg this is rly good this is exacly how i feel about this one boy i had to move away from but it was sad ..i love i tkeep up good work on writing poems! xox/lena

Heii thankz 4 commentin my poem...i realli like this one,....is nice..keep writing cuz u hab a great piece of mind..lolz...n i realy culd connect to this poem...

A torrent of emotions that i think almost everyone has experienced once.

i also like the difference in the length of the stanzas - it gives the poem a different flavour.

good luck and peace
shobhana

This was a really gd poem! I can really relate to it... very gd!! x x

I enjoyed it, great job

Damn you are good.and thankz for the comment.and yes i do speak from the heart in my poems...ill make sure to read part 2!