that was fantastic i am really sorry for yuor loss
everything will be ok
ok bye

i've lost my dad to but you've just gotta me strong you'll miss him like hell but you always need to remember what ever you do he will be proud of you maybe he is standing right beside but no one can see it i sometimes when im alone feel like im being watched so i presume its my dad and in the quietest voice i just say 'daddy i miss you im hurting so much without you, i need to tell you something but im scared' and its like hes there i always qusetion myself about if my dad will aprove and if you read the poem 'daddy i miss you' you will understand that its hard to go on without your dad but it will work because hes always by you side so stay strong and if you need to talk i'll be here :) great poem

omg!!! great poem but really sad it brought a tear 2 my eye keep up the gd work n keep ur head up im so sorry bout ur dad take care xxx

your poem is so emostional, its great but very sad i luv it !! keep up with the good work

hey i really like dis poem, i kno how you feel in a way i just lost my cousin and i always think to myself should i do dat is my cousin wtching me wat would he do.... i think this is a really good poem

wow..im really sry for ya loss hunni..must be extremly hard..ur strong
5/5

luv ya
-angel-
i voted a 5 for ya

cud u maybe chek out sum of my poems only if ya wnat to t ho

Grat work I actually cried when I read this. You have done a great job with this, its very emotional and respectful of your father. I gave you a five, you deserved it.