This is a great write, I loved... Such depth and meaning!

fantastic poem! some great effects 5/5 thnx loads 4 ur comment :) means allot

love mark xxx

WOW the depth and the way you have constructed the poem conjure up a physical and emotional picture. I love it very clever

I loved the imagery in this poem. It's one of those poems that makes you think. Keep up the great work!
<3 Em