hey..i really like this poem!! good luck with destroying it..wish i could share some of your optimism. take care x x x

Wow! This is a very heart felt poem with lots of passion. Well written.

brilliant... based on truth!... Optimistic?... wow thats a change.. but a good one!.. Keep it up..
:)Smile:)

Amazing poem,. you really do have a talent for writing

Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

snap hellah nice poem liked it liked it really goos hey thanxz for comment

hey thats good... ok i read your comment.. so im gonna delete my poem.. thanx for ur advice..
emmy