hey i really like this especially the concept of the poem. really awesome.
some stanza's didn't flow as smoothly as others but still great. take care x xx

WOW, ur poem iz exellent, its reali reali gr8 so tru and jus' great!!
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p.s cud u chek out 2 of my poems plz, suicide note and my pain thnx XxXx