You stand so tall

by Patrik   Aug 11, 2005


You stand so tall,
Watching me quietly,
As I begin to fall.

I don't understand,
What happened to us,
What went wrong?

You stand so tall,
With a smile on your face,
Do you run in a higher pace?

I don't understand,
The joy you seem to feel,
When I am forced to kneel.

You stand so tall,
While I crumble inside,
You stole all my pride.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ChaoticStreamOfLife

    This was a good poem, so sad

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholle

    The flow of this poem wasn't that great. But the poem it's self was good. Please comment back if you get the chance, it would mean a lot. Keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Excellent poem!

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    i like it :)

    comment on mine please :)

    <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie McCullick

    I normally don't like poems that don't have a set ryming pattern but I give this one a 5 anywyas....I like it.

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