by Darien Aug 11, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Don't Say I Lie |
by Natalie
This kinda confused me, At first I thought it was about a girl, But then I thought it was about a friend? Ohwell, It was still good. And I liked how you asked those questions, Tis was goooood! 5/5 |
by Little Dot
Great job on this poem. It was written well and has a good meaning. |
by shadowlight
This poem is great, not only did you express yourself extremely well but also made the rreader feel those emotions |
by Kayla
Great poem... I also wanted to know if u'd better comment on 'perfection'. U said u don't like perfection poems...what do u mean by that...the poem is about how my dad expects me to be perfect and I would rather die then be who he wants me to be...just asking.. |
wow.....thats all i have 2 say..... |