A gaze

by Liam   Aug 11, 2005


I gaze upon the stars
And my wrists full of scars
I stare one last stare into the sky
Just five more minutes left to die

You wished that i had never been born
When i die you'll smile and never mourn
I've cried for so many years
Its all too much, i'm fighting back the tears

As you read this your help will be too late
Everything i've ever loved is washed away
Im tired of being sad and depressed
I've breathed my very last breath

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  • 19 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    That is really good. A lot of emotion and depth. I liked how you said how you felt, and how the person who causes you pain would feel if you left this Earth. Very nice. Hope to read mor eof your work.

    -Jennifer.

  • 19 years ago

    by cuttingsherpleasuredeathishergame

    i can relate

  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    WOw.. that was like really emotional with a fantastic rhyme and great imagery ( well i could imagine it anyway)
    Take care
    Kt x

  • 19 years ago

    by cuttingsherpleasuredeathishergame

    i can relate

  • 19 years ago

    by **baby_girl**

    that is awesome but so sad u got a real talent i no exacuarly hw u feel my scars are an everlasting reminder of my past that haunts me ever day i am alive!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    check out sum of mine if u get da tym

    thnx

    tasha xxxxx

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