Broken Hearts and Relations

by Darien   Aug 11, 2005


Broken Hearts and Relations

Sometimes I wonder if we're still friends. We don't talk like we use to. Remember, you're the one that caused the pain. So why do you flinch like it hurts? I would take a knife to the back, as long as I know you stuck it there. That's how much you meant to me. I guess my pain was your glory. The blade in my back will be the scar, the one you gave me, the one that won't heal. I'll return the favour to you one day. Set your house on fire and watch you burn. You wouldn't have expected it, but your pain is my hatred. The one you gave me, I'll return. With your demise, I'll be healed. Sometimes I wish I never knew you. But you’re stuck on my back, like a heavy load. Have fun breaking hearts. I hope your's die, so I can live again. My regrets are played out like a game. You haven't won this game. Because I will win another heart.

*Another freestyle poem. I was in the mood to write today.*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "I hope your's die"
    not sure what it was referring to. If you mean you hope her heart will die, then it'd be:
    "I hope yours dies"
    ~~~
    I didn't like the repitition of 'game' close to the end of the poem. Beyond that, I thought it was a pretty fun ride of emotion, though some of it was more brutal than I'd ever admit to in a poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    This poem is really great. A lot of emotion. Perfect words. I can really feel your hurt.

    Thank you for being so sweet.
    Tiffany.xox.

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    The poem was very good tho i do hope it's not true. when some one hruts you be the bigger person tho it may hurt like hell. show that your strong by moving on and i know easer said then done. keep up the amazing work. 5.5

  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    very evil, though a scence of wanting justice. pretty good. freewriting, lol, i know exactly what you mean. i do that a lot.

  • 19 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow, sounds like your going threw alot of pain rite now. Sumtimes I just wish i would close my eyes wake up and it was all a dream! I know the feelings you have for that person because they got the best of me also. Well anyways i loved the poem i could easily relate . 5/5

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