very well written. You seem really talented. this was very sad but
I enjoyed reading it. I loved it specially the beginning.
much love,
marjan

This is a really good poem. I can't wait to read more. Doesn't situations like these leave great poems, but the people who write them feel bad? Hmm.. I know how you feel. But take care!

nice job.. you should make more poems.. you're pretty good... keep up the great work!
take care of you
amanda

in my opinion, this poem should be in the "lost love" category, but it is very nice! great work!