by Kayla Aug 11, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
You and me together. |
by Ashley
Great poem! Beautiful! I enjoyed it and I'm sure many people can relate! Love ya lots!!!! |
That was great, 5/5, the rymeing was excellent, your flow was perfect, and I enjoyed the poem itself, great job! |
by Emilia
Great poem.. very cute =D 5/5! |
by Drew Gold
Pretty good.. decent flow and rhyme.. the following line doesnt sit well with me for some reason.. my head keeps wanting to change it it.. away from there.. even th0 that would interrupt the flow.. it just seems awkward to me as is.. anyway good job.. love, like writing, is a good get away.. i agree.. |
by SweetSuicide
Cute poem...5/5 |