I like this! The descriptions you used were amazing! As I read it I could envision it so easily! It flowed very well also! Keep it up~Holly

wow! fab poem, brillaint effect, loved it 5/5 thnx 4 ur comments :)

love mark xxx

Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

I had to read it over again to envision this metaphor...*still sleepy I guess* finally I got it. great write...keep up the good work

peace always,
JJ

I too read the poem a few times but theimagery was awsome. I could clearly see. Great stuff

wow you are totally amazing hun! xox

wow great poem,keep it up :)

Fabulous poem. I love your writing. I will definitely be adding you to my favorites.

Amazing work, keep up the good writing!

Warmest regards,

Steve