I find this amazingly written. Truly beautifully spoken. Though, I'm not sure I quite get the message, like, what it's about. To me it feels like you're refering to how things are on drugs, but I fear I'm by far wrong...and I don't quite see where this relates to nature...but like I've told you, I'm not much a clever one. :-). I will continue to read this over and over till I get a good idea what you mena, then I'll comment again. :-) <3 Love you. |
Correct: mean* |
by Patrik
Good poem, but something about it was a little off, perhaps the way I choose to read it, not quite sure, sorry:/ |
by Hans Fausto
brings out the creativity :p |
beautiful!!!!! you're very talented. keep it up! |