:-( This got to me really well...This recently happened to me :-(. I love this one so much. The second stanza hit me hard, and then third and fourth stanzas even harder...Totally strummed on my heart strings. <3 I love it.

Just two teeny corrections :-) :
In the title, you have "Your", it should be "you're".
& I believe "heaven" is meant to be capitalized, though I could be wrong there. :-).

Love you angel.

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCareHunxx

Good poem, but the last line feelt as if you just wanteed to end the poem fast.

Best wishes,
Patrik

this is a reallly good poem!!! i know that feeling!!! Amanda

I loved ur poem! It was really touching.
~Smile Always~
Gina

nicely written, great job

The last line brought it all together, before that it kept me thinking. I love poems that make me think.

Well done :)

I really love this poem .. Its amazing. Ur pro at writing.
*5/5*
Jess xox