A personal opinion

by bucky   Aug 11, 2005


Is this all there is
Is there nothing more out there?
For you
For me
For us all

Life seems to long
And at times to short
Were all looking
And listening
Waiting for the finishing touch

Is this all I’m every going to see
Pain, hunger, and misery
I don’t think I’ll see a change in this lifetime
But I can hope for the next

I’ve seen better days
But those better days were long ago
Now a days people don’t give anything a chance to grow

Were all living in a man made world now
How this came to past I do not know
People forget this world was supposed be shared
Not destroyed
My personal opinion is we’ve realized this too late
But I guess there was no stopping us
I guess it was our fate
And there’s nothing we can do now
Nothing but wait
Damn our so call intelligence
It has become the death of us all

© John Buckwheat 2004

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  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    all very true! nice job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Garrett

    "Damn our so call intelligence
    It has become the death of us all" Awesome line and a great end to a great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hey :)

    I really liked the idea but work on the flow a tiny bit at parts :D

    x)