omg i loved this poem!!! i like how it shows boths sides!!!! great writting keep it up!!! really cool poems!!!
~Lotta luv~
~Britty~

this is a very true poem, I loved how you gave both points because most loves poems only ahve one.

the only part I was confused about was this
"I can't live without"

can't live without what?
"I can't live without her"

was it supposed to be something like that?

x)

Very original poem. I like how you had the story told from both points of view. Too bad she didn't return his affection. Awesome, Travis.