It's been awhile,
Since we officially said goodbye,
But on this day,
When I saw you for the first time in a long time,
It hurt so much.
The sinking feeling,
I realized today
I had never been closer to any other human being
Never
We had something special
It's gone,
I miss you so much
I miss you so so horribly much...
When I saw you for the first time in a long time
too long, should shorten it.
I had never been closer to any other human being
also too long, needs to be shortened.
I like how you used the last two lines, it made it that much better, nicely down, 5/5