My first love

by alias   Aug 12, 2005


I remember you so clearly
as i looked you in the eyes.
like romeo and juliet
it was a sin to be together.
but still i held on
and i kept you close,
you were there for me
and you loved me the most.
more than anyone else
unlike them you cared.
my feelings i shared
and my secrets you held.
the first time we kissed
i felt your cool steel lips.
they pressed against my skin
and i watched the blood drip.
it was then that i knew
you were my first love.
the feeling of release when we were together,
and it was on that day i fell in love with my razor.

this poem obviously has alot of personification. its about my first time cutting if u didnt catch it. well enjoy & thanks for reading

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  • 19 years ago

    by lance

    Great poem... moved by the emotion you put into it. moved as well because i used to know the same feeling. keep writing.