Comments : One kiss as i fade away

  • 19 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    wow this was really powerful, i loved it. are you going to be writing a part 2??? let me know...i'll really be looking forward to it. great job putting all the emotion into it and i loved your style of writing. nice job keep it up!!!

    Sara

  • 19 years ago

    by Jenny

    That was awesome. Very heart-felt

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica K

    Holy .. im speechless. That poem was amazing really heartfelt and leaves u wanting the next part..Keep writing
    Jess xox