I wan't so sure about the title and the first verse in accordance, but i really like your message, its sad and strongly opinionated. You've certainly grown in talent!

luv kt

Hey amy i love the poem sends out a strong message. i must agree george bush is a retard!!!!!!!! seriously i wish he would just disapear

from ur claire bear (heheheheh)

Hey, I just wanted to say that I liked your poem, it made a good and blunt point. Im in the US and my man is in Iraq, and as much as I support HIM and what HE feels he has been called to do... I hate the fact that Bush sends our men all over the place to get killed, and then takes extra long vacations... cuz, ya know, he's just SUCH a great Pres its hard work to tell other people when to die... ugh! Nice job chick!