aww.. that was so cute.. i loved the emotion.. it sorta made ME blush (wat the hell thats gotta do with me, i hv no clue :P), but i gez thats ur words.. they go this deep :).. i lykd the way u captured those details.. and i loved ur ending.. it made me smile.. im usually 4 a rhyme, but this one wudnt hv been this charming with one..
keep up the love
thnx 4 sharing
nouna

That was so sweet and very beautiful....I loved how you wrote all those details, made me picture the poem.....And the ending was just perfect, cause that made me smile =0) Great job with this one ...

*Hugs Sabrina*

Very nice poem!
You just feel all the emotions through the word who flow so great!
I sure love it!

xxx

I think your poem is great and im very sorry you didnt have shoes
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pretend that is a pair of shoes ;)

now you have some

lots of love

Alllalone

The shoes didnt come out the way they were on the screne

Hmmm i can't say i hate but it wasn't my favorite...it was funny i must say....but you started so strong and meaninful and then it went to funny which i thought was weird it left me just like what happened

Needless to say, you are very talented and you are truly a poetic girl. Although I agree with Jamie in that the powerful emotion felt at the beginning seemed to fade away. Nevertheless, an excellent piece.

Hehehe, this is funny. I'd suggest changing 'I want to really meet her' to 'I really want to meet her.' Its reads as a comical interpretation of love - I liked it :)