<3 Wonderful write hun. I know exactly what you're talking about.

Your eyes are screaming what you think, and you want this person to notice, without you havng to say anything, because you don't know how to say it. And you think that this person feels the same but can't say it either. You wanted to tell this person, but now it's too late for a reason...I assume the reason is the person moved away, or passed on. That's my guess at least.

It's a brilliant poem and I'm sure many can relate. Lovely work. =) Love you my dear.

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCareHunxx

i know exactly how you feel!! this guy that has a crush on me, i feel the same way around him! if you ever need to talk email me!!! much luv god bless
amanda

I sorta understand it :)
The flow wasn't the best and made it a bit hard to read but its getting your feelings out and thats all that matters :)

well done :)

It's not confusing but you sure did betray your confusion. It came through loud and clear. Very nicely done...I love how you just left it like that...you never said what it was you were trying to get out. You left the reader wanting more and wondering what you were thinking..... What you really wanted to let out.