Wow, this was very creative and well written. I loved it. I think maybe you should add in how she died, or why she did, like, why was she in the hospital? I think it would add a little something, but it is brilliant as is. Magical, and I'm sure it happens. <3 Love you Renee, you're amazing hun. xoxoxox

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

umm... wow this is a VERY good poem!! honestly it is! 5/5
Amanda

aww. I know this is sad but some bits like the butterflies were just so nice :)

well done..the flow was good and it just worked i guess?

Why is it so morbid....that's horribly sad! It seemed to me he really fell in love with her right before she died....that is horrible COONAY! Ugh....that sent shivers down my spine. Write something happy....with a happy ending. Okie dokes...I got some catching up to do...NEXT