aww.. that was a pretty sad love poem.. im sorry ur goin thru it (if its bout u) am sorry any1 wud go thru this oain.. i loved the way u used ur rhyme and it didnt seem forced at all.. it was so deep.. ur words wer touching..
keep up the talent
stay strong
nouna

That was a really lovely poem. I'm sorry you are going through this, though. I can understand how you feel. I hope things work out. Take care.
><> Kiesha

Excellent, very well written with great flow in the words, I loved it.

best wishes,
Patrik