My death

by lostlllsoul   Aug 12, 2005


The things you said to me
They just wont seem to go away
I don't mean to drag it on
But its running in my mind all day

Your hollow words
They cut me from deep within
You took my heart
And threw it into the bin

Do u really care??
You've ripped me through
You've left me just plain and bare
You put me way below your shoe

By the time you've read this
I'd most probably be dead
I have decided
What would be of my fate

I know no one will miss me
No one had ever
No one will even notice
Soon it'll be my death after a year

I didn't want it to end this way
Honestly, I'm still afraid
But with the things you did
I'd rather be better of dead

I'm sorry for everything
For all the trouble I've caused
Cause I know you felt
That i was a great loss

You cut me deeper
Than any knife could
You left me to bleed inside
My life.. misunderstood

I'm sorry but this is the last straw

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  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    So sad and so emotional written, great poem...I really relate to it!!! Ok you asked me to comment honestly, so here we go....In the beginning I thought it was perfect, both flow and rhyming, but in the ending your seem to loose the rhyming.....Maybe you should try to make the lines more even?? Other than that the poem was so deep and very touching and I enjoyed reading it!!!If you want advice on how to improve your poetry, join the poetry club, mystic minds, it's a great club =0) Keep up the good work!!!

    *Hugs Sabrina

  • 19 years ago

    by SmIlEbAcKtHeTeArS

    wow this is an awesome poem keep it up and check out mine if u get the chance

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I would care and i would notice if you died.

  • 19 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    Nice sad poem hun. so sad tho i hope everything is alright.
    i love you n i am gonna miss you so think abt the pain i'd be in if i lost you.

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