Nice sad poem hun. so sad tho i hope everything is alright.
i love you n i am gonna miss you so think abt the pain i'd be in if i lost you.

I would care and i would notice if you died.

wow this is an awesome poem keep it up and check out mine if u get the chance

So sad and so emotional written, great poem...I really relate to it!!! Ok you asked me to comment honestly, so here we go....In the beginning I thought it was perfect, both flow and rhyming, but in the ending your seem to loose the rhyming.....Maybe you should try to make the lines more even?? Other than that the poem was so deep and very touching and I enjoyed reading it!!!If you want advice on how to improve your poetry, join the poetry club, mystic minds, it's a great club =0) Keep up the good work!!!

*Hugs Sabrina