by Naomi          Aug 12, 2005
    
        category :
            Sadness, depression /
            grieving, loss
            
    
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            Oh baby, how I long for you | 
| I love it, the repetition of sweetheart and baby, in any other context would be a bit full on, but cos of the subject its so heartbreaking. And then when you move awayfrom the repetitino in thelast couple of stanzas...it really struck a chord with me, its amazing. | 
| Awesome poem. I've read many of yours on here. You are very talented | 
by Amy
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