Murdering Hearts

This is one of the best things I've read on this site-it just really hit home with me.I love your use of rhyme(which usually I dislike rhyming stuff cause it can be so cliche) but your rhyme usage is fresh and original, especially the internal rhymes in certain lines.Again, your ability to convey such strong emotion is amazing.I can really feel everything so vividly.I love the last line-one of the best end lines I've ever read, such power and impact.This is simply a sad but beautifully created poem.

I couldnt send u a personal messege so i'll write it here.
well first thx for the comment...thx a lot it means a lot to me.
second i av to say that i do lyk ur poems and i am looking forward to see more ofur nice poems.. so keep writing.
Thx Agn!!!

Hey, really good poem, well written. It flows really well, good job !!

Thanks for commenting on my poem, i really appreciate it.