by tiffany Aug 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
*really long but please read and r/c* |
by Atomic
A touching story, but the rhymes were too forced. |
Hey Tiff, I'm in social and am bored good poem hun! lo lyou rock my sox off!!! |
by kiesha
Nice job. That was really sad, but I like how the ending has a happier outlook, that he will live on through the people. It was splendid. |
this is really good it was long but worth the time!!!!!!lol plz comment on my poem Never thanx!!!!! |
by josh baker
good |