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this is really good it was long but worth the time!!!!!!lol plz comment on my poem Never thanx!!!!!

Nice job. That was really sad, but I like how the ending has a happier outlook, that he will live on through the people. It was splendid.
><> Kiesha

Hey Tiff, I'm in social and am bored good poem hun! lo lyou rock my sox off!!!

A touching story, but the rhymes were too forced.

"but in out hearts and minds he will always be."
I believe you meant "our". =)

"As you all know
Rob and I were the best of friends,
always by each other's side
until the very end."

This is the stanza at which everything esle after it seemed to forced. Everything before it was fine and very good.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!