by RaNdOmGaL Aug 12, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Oh daddy can't you see? |
by Emily
Wow. Very good poem hon. I really can relate in a way about my family and I. I love it. 5/5 Im gonna be putting some more recent poems on my site, so check them out when you can! Mel. |
by Gianna
You are such a great great writing this poem is excellent, Keep up the good writing |
by RaNdOmGaL
thanx chelsey :) i'm trying to stay strong :) i'm just reading your email at the moment!!! |
by Chelsey
awww geesh girl. This poem got to me emotionally because I know part of your story. I am sooo sorry you feel this way. I absolutley loved this poem!!!! Loved every line and every rhyme and the flow of it was awesome! I rate you no lower then a five although it should be much higher. Please stay strong for me Gemma! I really know you can! |
by RaNdOmGaL
thanx |