by williamcampbell Aug 12, 2005
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
In just one second,Lives were changed. |
Wow, you have a great talent. I like poems with the repetitive beginning. It adds strength to the poem. I like the last line the best. It was a wonderful way to end the poem. Definitely not expected, but very good! 5/5. Keep writing, you have talent! |
by Lisa
Powerful poem. I loved it. |
by Pilar
wohoo i loved it |
by NannO
that was prety amazing, too.. i lykd how u repeated "in just one second", tho it seemed a lil boring.. hhe.. i loved how u concluded ur poem.. i wonder y no1 read this or commented or voted.. :) |