by williamcampbell Aug 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A sheet of white is on the ground, |
by Sweet lig
Well i like this poet its great very impressive... just keep on writing! thanks for sharing this wonderful poets |
by Lithium
I love it, your rhyming is excellent! |
Brilliant poem, very well written, and a very important message. Keep up the brilliant poetry!!! |
by NannO
OMG.. am so sorry bout this (did it reli happen??) this was so sad.. ur rhyming was perfect and the flow was amazing, tho.. i jus thot u shud space em out lyk a poem, coz it looks lyk a paragraph.. but that was reli amazing.. |