OMG.. am so sorry bout this (did it reli happen??) this was so sad.. ur rhyming was perfect and the flow was amazing, tho.. i jus thot u shud space em out lyk a poem, coz it looks lyk a paragraph.. but that was reli amazing..
thnx a lot 4 ur comment
take care

Brilliant poem, very well written, and a very important message. Keep up the brilliant poetry!!!

I love it, your rhyming is excellent!
xox fallen

Well i like this poet its great very impressive... just keep on writing! thanks for sharing this wonderful poets