I just want to meet u in person..

by Steven   Aug 13, 2005


Each time we talk on the Internet
each time we send each other love letters mails
each time i lay down on my bed
looking outside on the dark bright sky
i just wonder what it would be like if we live together and hang out together?
i just wonder how much fun would both of us would have?
i just want to meet you in person and hold your hands and walk down the street
i just want to kiss you on your lips and leave a unforgettable kiss on your lips
i just want to sit right next to you and whisper into your ears and tell you that i love you
i just want to meet you in person
i just wish there wasn't a wall of distance between us
cause I'll never know and see if you love me the same way i do

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~*EsTeR*~

    Hey i like this poem alot i can pretty much relate to it ALOT...its good

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    OH MY GOD! I know EXACTLY how you feel. I'm in the SAME situation. It's succckkssss soooo much! <3 Great write. SO beautiful and I'm sure many can relate. :-) Great work Steven.

    Just a few corrections m'dear:
    "love letters mails" <- I think you mean 'love letter mails',
    "dark bright sky" -> dark night sky?,
    "if we live together and hang out together?" -> I think you mean 'lived together' and it's 'hung out' in this case, not 'hang out',
    "a unforgettable" -> it should be 'an',
    And also, your 'i's should be capitalized.

    Sorry to be a smart ass, just trying to help out. :-). <3 Beautiful write.

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by taz

    hey this was really good i can relate to it so much not so long ago i was in an internet reletionship we stayed 2gether 4 almost 9months. i feel lik i have lost a part of me whicch is kinda weird becoz lik i hav never met this guy... da week we were going to met he broke up wiv me so i think his hiding sumthing so nxt holidays im flying up to see him so hopefully things work out coz i cant stand not lik talking to him n stuff... neway really really good job on da poem it was so sweet n touching i loved it keep up da great work n if u hav time check out sum of my poems i would appreciate so much n also if u ever wana talk email me...

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