hey this was really good i can relate to it so much not so long ago i was in an internet reletionship we stayed 2gether 4 almost 9months. i feel lik i have lost a part of me whicch is kinda weird becoz lik i hav never met this guy... da week we were going to met he broke up wiv me so i think his hiding sumthing so nxt holidays im flying up to see him so hopefully things work out coz i cant stand not lik talking to him n stuff... neway really really good job on da poem it was so sweet n touching i loved it keep up da great work n if u hav time check out sum of my poems i would appreciate so much n also if u ever wana talk email me...

OH MY GOD! I know EXACTLY how you feel. I'm in the SAME situation. It's succckkssss soooo much! <3 Great write. SO beautiful and I'm sure many can relate. :-) Great work Steven.

Just a few corrections m'dear:
"love letters mails" <- I think you mean 'love letter mails',
"dark bright sky" -> dark night sky?,
"if we live together and hang out together?" -> I think you mean 'lived together' and it's 'hung out' in this case, not 'hang out',
"a unforgettable" -> it should be 'an',
And also, your 'i's should be capitalized.

Sorry to be a smart ass, just trying to help out. :-). <3 Beautiful write.

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Hey i like this poem alot i can pretty much relate to it ALOT...its good