A little story

Please comment, I dont know if it's any good. But I tried

A young girl and her father went for a walk one day. As they were walking the little girl asked her father,
“Daddy, do we turn into angels when we die?”
The father a little surprised by such a question replied,
“Of course honey”.
The little girl replied quickly,
“Are angels here with us on earth?”
Her father got down on one knee and replied and took his little girl in his arms,
“Angels are always with, on the bus, on the streets, even when were sleeping. They can even hear us when were talking”
The two walked back home, taking in very sight along the way.
Two days later, after the little girl’s mother walked her to school, on the way home she stopped at the store to grab so milk. While she was crossing the street she was struck by a car. When the little girl returned home that night she found her father sitting at the table crying. She walked up to her father and asked,
“Daddy, what’s wrong?”
“Sweetie, today there was an accident, mommy past away”
The little girl though for a moment and then asked,
“Daddy, why are you crying?”
“Because honey when adults are sad sometimes they cry”
The little girl smiled and said
“Daddy you don’t have to cry”
Her father a little startled asked
“Honey, why not?”
“Because don’t you remember, angels are with us everyday, there with us when we walk to school, and even when were sleeping”
With that the little girl went into her room and sat on her bed. And took out her toys and started to play