by TrUtH hUrTs
wow it's a lovely poem..especially for a 14 yr old...and i wonder if u really feeel this way...u know, 'alone'...coz i feel it loads of times...and ironically enough when i am in a crowd....i actually think all of us feel alone sometime or the other... |
hey i loved it xxx |
by ASPHYXIATED
This was deep well done :) |
by Kayla
wow very good....i liked the the flow of it....nice write....5/5 luv yas mwah |
by DevilWithin
yeah i agree on all of the above.. you do really good work---Rachel |
by Chelsi
Great job!! full of different thoughts and emotions!! Keep writing! 5/5 |
by Allyce
that poem was real good and i can relate to it |
OMG!!!! i love your poem...i can clearly see myself in it...keep it up!!! |
by Knoxy
Hey, this is really good..i know exactly wut you mean..there are rainbowz after the rain...just member that, i hope ur alrite, take care and keep on writing! this was awesome! 5/5 |
by Princess09
OMG babygurl i love u n dont think like tht u r such a wonderfull person n u mean the world to me u make my life soooo much better n u make me soo much happier i luv u w/ all my heart sweety so dont forget luv me ur sexi bf lol ~~ronni |