wow it's a lovely poem..especially for a 14 yr old...and i wonder if u really feeel this way...u know, 'alone'...coz i feel it loads of times...and ironically enough when i am in a crowd....i actually think all of us feel alone sometime or the other...
and i really liked how the title is incorporated in teh poem,..kudos!

hey i loved it xxx

This was deep well done :)

wow very good....i liked the the flow of it....nice write....5/5 luv yas mwah

-kayla-

yeah i agree on all of the above.. you do really good work---Rachel

Great job!! full of different thoughts and emotions!! Keep writing! 5/5

that poem was real good and i can relate to it

OMG!!!! i love your poem...i can clearly see myself in it...keep it up!!!

Hey, this is really good..i know exactly wut you mean..there are rainbowz after the rain...just member that, i hope ur alrite, take care and keep on writing! this was awesome! 5/5
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

OMG babygurl i love u n dont think like tht u r such a wonderfull person n u mean the world to me u make my life soooo much better n u make me soo much happier i luv u w/ all my heart sweety so dont forget luv me ur sexi bf lol ~~ronni