by M MEM Aug 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
There is life |
I really like that. Nice comparisons...and it's true...it's sad when you realize too late... Well done. |
by Lenny
I think thats great, i like how you compare life to a trail or path thats a great comparison |
by nikki
Excellent poem i luv it 5/5 all the way. good job. |