I love it....I think that the words are perfect and I really understand it. You have to have been there or be in that place now to really understand those words, even though it doesn't rhyme, it flows beautifully!

i liked the repitition, it made the poem more powerful, i think.

Hey dont feel that way...im here, u do have someone to tlk to, and thats me...im here for u...email me very_sexxy_lady_13@yahoo.com , take care baby
love always,
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Wow this is a powerful poem
i really liked this part:
"I don’t drink to remember
I don’t drink to forget
I don’t drink for fun
I don’t drink to lose control
I just drink"
it's sad though that you are an alchohalic, i hope you find the strenght to stop drinking eventually

Thats a good poem..; i can relate i think lol

Hey chris...
I know what you mean...sometimes can be hard to give up to something that you have been doing for a while, I don't drink but I do know what you meant! Hope you find a way to let go of it and you may fine all those things that you wish for! 5/5 great poem and take care...like all your poems.

Hey Chris,

Great poem It was really good, yet long.